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Posted on March 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM

"Lucky 7 Meme"

 

 

Lucky 7 Meme 

 

 Randi_lee , an exceptional writing talent, recently tagged me for a challenge called the “Lucky 7 Meme” . I'm grateful she was thoughtful & wise enough to send the following instructions...

 

The rules are:

 

-Turn to page 77 of your work-in-progress (WIP)

-Go down to line 7

-Copy down the next 7 lines - sentences or paragraphs - and post them as they're written.

-No cheating!

Once complete tag seven new people to partake in the challenge! And let them know.

So here are my seven paragraphs from my current work-in-progress (a WIP as Randi_lee and more seasoned writers would say)...

 

 

 

Politely declining an offer of scotch, gin or a cigar, he thanked Henry Chase Corwin anyway and sat in the recliner chair the House Ways & Means Committee chairman pointed to. Legend has it that whenever a member of congress wasn't sure how they would vote on pending legislation, they would be summoned to the Kingmaker's private suite for either some good old-fashioned cajoling or arm twisting. He wasn't exactly the committee chairman's rubber stamp, often voting his conscience instead of along party lines, so he braced himself for the latter.

 

 

Still a strikingly handsome figure at age 67, Chairman Corwin crossed the room to close the French doors to his private office. Closing the door may just mean their meeting would be private, he reasoned, slightly fidgeting in his seat. However, when the silver-haired gentleman begin to close the silky gold drapes, legend held that a major dressing down was in order. He watched Chairman Corwin, who was fingering his scotch glass, speak into an intercom system on his expansive mahogany desk and instruct his secretary to hold all calls.

 

 

Now turning his full attention to the freshman congressman, there was that look he had often heard others speak about in hush tones, certainly not to Chairman Corwin's face, but there it was, a face akin to stone accompanied by an intimidating cold stare,  metamorphosing quickly into a glare that temporarily paralyzed him with unmistakable fear. "Listen to me, you young whippersnapper!" How dare you waltz into my committee and dare to challenge my ideas and vision! DO YOU KNOW WHO I AM?!"

 

 

He had subconsciously sat up right and pressed his back to his chair as if it was his Pappy scolding him about allowing foxes in the hen house as a lad, or Coach Wright--in a fit of anger and fustration--verbally blasting him years later in front of his teammates for throwing an ill-advised pass that was intercepted by their  Homecoming Game opponents in the waning minutes of a seesaw contest.  His knuckles begin to whiten as he pressed down hard on the arm rest as his jaw clenched, struggling to maintain a sense of discpline in spite of wanting to lash out amid Chairman Corwin's tongue lashing.

 

 

Corwin stopped his tirade briefly to wet his whistle, draining the remaining contents in his scotch glass, before resuming without missing a beat, "Now, you listen here mister, I was out securing America's freedoms in Korea and Vietnam before you could even use the potty, so either you vote along party lines tomorrow morning, or you are finished in Washington, understood?! As if discarding stale milk, Chairman Corwin waved his hand in a dismissive manner, adding, " You had better learn how to play the game kid, or tuck your tail between your legs and go home to mommy".

 

 

Akin to a NASA rocket at the precise moment of lift-off at the Kennedy Space Center, he bolted up from his chair in a flash, and was at the door, spinning around to return fire with fire, something his Mum always warned him about, citing something about two wrongs don't make a right". Though her words had served him well for many years to come, not this time, he wasn't going back down, especially to the likes of politicians like Chairman Corwin who were beholden to special interest groups instead of the best interests of the American people.

 

 

Mum hold your ears he thought aloud as he stood tall and said, "With all due respect to your service to our country, Mr. Chairman, I'm going to vote my conscience tomorrow. The chips will fall where they may. I don't represent you, nor a party label, my allegiance is first and foremost to the folks in my congressional district". With that, he bid, "Good Day, Sir!!!" and headed down the length of the powder blue carpeted hallway towards an Exit sign flashing at the end of the corridor. He needed some fresh air, and Aimee's reassuring smile...tough choices lay ahead.

 

And that’s that!  Hope it makes at least a little sense. I’m going to tag the following people listed below. Even if they don’t participate, given this busy thing we call LIFE, they all are noteworthy in their own right.  Be sure to check them out!

 

 

Jswwrites

Nissie

Suzanne

Julz

Charity

Leslie

Tom

 

 

 

 

 

 

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14 Comments

Reply Meesh
08:31 AM on March 20, 2012 
Bonjour Al!

Great job!
Reply Diane Carlisle
10:37 AM on March 20, 2012 
Great choice to the young lad!
Reply Al
10:41 AM on March 20, 2012 
Bonjour Meesh!

Merci Beaucoupe! Good to see you...enjoy your day!

Sidebar: penny for your thoughts on the next to last paragraph that begins with "Akin to a NASA rocket...", Is there another way to convey my intent using other words? Asked that because when I read it myself, it doesn't seem "right". Have to keep the reader in mind.
Reply Al
10:52 AM on March 20, 2012 
Diane Carlisle says...
Great choice to the young lad!


Good morning, Diane!

Yes, have to agree with you, there comes a time when one has to take a stand, regardless of the costs. Unfortunately, in politics, decent, well-intentioned public servants are often "chewed up and spit out" before they can enact measures where the art of governing returns to the will of the people.


Good to see you. Thank you for venturing over--much appreciated. Over to get my reading fix @ your place in a few. Thanks again.
Reply Randi Lee
12:40 PM on March 20, 2012 
Al,

I wasn't thinking and almost typed the security words into the message section of comments, ha!

Well, this is lovely. You do a great job of hooking with every single paragraph because even from the beginning of your line 7 I wanted to know more. I can't wait to read this in its entirety!

Oh- and thanks for the shout out :-)!!
Reply Al
05:48 PM on March 20, 2012 
Randi Lee says...
Al,

I wasn't thinking and almost typed the security words into the message section of comments, ha!

Well, this is lovely. You do a great job of hooking with every single paragraph because even from the beginning of your line 7 I wanted to know more. I can't wait to read this in its entirety!

Oh- and thanks for the shout out :-)!!



Hey Randi_lee!

Hahaha @ your close call with those pesky old security words (my favorite challenge from another blogsite-software is the one that asks me to "prove you are not a robot" (wtfudge I usually think to myself, since when does a human have to prove they are human?!, , but usually just go along and humor the software-challenge nontheless, especially on great sites like yours--the extra few seconds is more than worth it).

You are welcome for the Shout-out (well-deserved), and Thank You for the invitation to participate in this pretty nifty idea. Enjoyed reading your "Rainy Day" prompt. Keep polishing your gift. Happy writing!
Reply Meesh
09:27 PM on March 20, 2012 
Al said;"Sidebar: penny for your thoughts on the next to last paragraph that begins with "Akin to a NASA rocket...", Is there another way to convey my intent using other words?


No, just exactly how you have expressed it... here in Canada we have nothing. fireworks maybe, it was beautifully written on your part.
Perhaps though sweetie, milk in our parts "sours" and then we wave it off...prior to being "stale". Bread gets stale right? UNLESS in the USA it's different. What is stale milk? I still say I love every innuendo, Pappy, Mum, Coach Wright... who enter in, that beautiful mind of yours intrigues me. "Always" has.You write from the "heart". A great heart,
Reply Al
08:56 AM on March 21, 2012 
Meesh says...
Al said;"Sidebar: penny for your thoughts on the next to last paragraph that begins with "Akin to a NASA rocket...", Is there another way to convey my intent using other words?


No, just exactly how you have expressed it... here in Canada we have nothing. fireworks maybe, it was beautifully written on your part.
Perhaps though sweetie, milk in our parts "sours" and then we wave it off...prior to being "stale". Bread gets stale right? UNLESS in the USA it's different. What is stale milk? I still say I love every innuendo, Pappy, Mum, Coach Wright... who enter in, that beautiful mind of yours intrigues me. "Always" has.You write from the "heart". A great heart,


Bonjour Meesh!

Thanks/Merci Beaucoupe for sharing yoour insights. Bit of a confession about that stale milk, psssst-writing from the experiences of one, ahem, who has allowed a few milks to go to milk heaven while being forgotten in the fridge. But, you know what, bread does make sense, so when I tidy the storyline up I'll insert bread instead of milk. Merci : )
Reply Ethan Jones
03:05 PM on March 21, 2012 
Great idea and an interesting read.

Thanks for this.

Ethan

http://ethanjones.blog.com
Reply Al
05:14 PM on March 21, 2012 
Hi there, Ethan!

Thanks for venturing over--much appreciated. Congratulations on your latest spy thriller "Arctic Wargame" (Coming out in Spring 2012). Best wishes with your future writing projects--Cheers!
Reply Kelly Hashway
05:58 PM on March 21, 2012 
I love this meme. It's fun reading everyone's work.
Reply Al
06:19 PM on March 21, 2012 
Hello Kelly!

Thanks for venturing by--much appreciated. Yes, have to agree @ it's fun reading everyone's work. Enjoyed reading your brief synopsis on "Pure" by Jennifer Armentrout, the second book in the Covenant Series. Hope it flys off the shelves next month.
Reply jenc813
02:53 AM on March 25, 2012 
Wow, that's quite a powerful excerpt. I like the way you show the "young whippersnapper"s thoughts through the whole thing, how he's feeling, how powerfully he can be affected by the mere demeanor of the chairman, yet how he also holds firm to his ground.
Reply Al
06:48 AM on March 25, 2012 
Hey Jen!

A note of thanks to a future librarian is in order--much appreciated. Best wishes on your Masters mid-term (hope you ace it). Good to see you. While I'm thinking of it, please let me thank you for answering my question weeks ago relative to your travels to Washington, D.C., where I asked you if you guys noticed if the sparkling waters of the Potomac was flowing easily downstream, or--given the Season--if perhaps its river banks were frozen. Your helpful answer has prompted me to shelve a Winter scene, and draft a Spring scene amid the beautiful cherry blossoms.

Over to visit Tuesday to determine what's next on tap at your Epic Treats. Enjoy your day : )